Dark Poetry #3 |
Sterilization |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
These poems of this nature are the product of a friendly poetic duel I am having with a very darling young man named echo on another board. He's into goth and the cold of concrete and steel. I do not post his response poems here. Just mine. Surround not with the filth of misinformed fools who create these steel gods. Concrete idols. Towers that reach to the heavens. Did Babel teach us nothing? Still with a false sense of progress we build not beauty, but dung heaps with floor upon floor to hold the ants of society. Individuality lost in the shameful waste of nature. The war rooms! surely you mock. The pit of hell upon earth. Gargoyle not man. Rubbing hands together. Modern day plunderer of what is natural. Saliva drooling pigs who rape the land. destruction disruption devastation I want to feel your embrace yet I fear the heat of science will burn my flesh. You cannot hold me close soft lace will melt, underneath your touch. WhiteRose "The first rule of poetry, write what you know." |
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Sikanda Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54 |
Wow. Powerful words and imagery. I like it a lot. ~ Sikanda ~ |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
*stepping back* yes I thought you looked a little different maybe you got your hair done or something well, lady I like the new look vivid gray dripping chains of industrial nightmares but, make sure you put Anne's old clothes on sometimes too hugs ya b |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thanks for the comments. They are appreciated. Don't worry. I shall don the old garb again. These be a bit heavy. |
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Amaranthine Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61ON Canada |
Lovely in metaphorical accuracy. Still, you make me feel uncomfortable, remining me as you do of what I try to forget, and making me want more at the same time! Are you turning me into a masochist, or was I simply that way already? |
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