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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-10-08 10:44 PM

The only reason she speaks of him is in attempt to bring me down.
It's not fair, the way I'm mistreated.
It's not fair, that I'm always last.
It's not fair that he said that he loved me,
and still I am one of the past.

The only time you spoke of him, was when she knew I needed him.
It's not fair, I'm just pushed aside.
It's not fair, I've been lied to.
It's not fair that he said he loved me,
and still doesn't care if I die.

It's not fair, that friends are competition.
It's not fair, that you're so damn ambitious.
It's not fair that the fact that your thinner,
make you the winner.

It's not fair, that he's not who I thought...

I just want to die...

And of all people, I thought he'd be the one to understand that, and try to prevent it-- Not provoke it ... but what do I know??
I guess ... not him.

"Drink the bleach as if it were water"

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (10-10-2002 06:43 PM).]

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2002-10-09 01:35 AM

i like this, how often do you really "know" somebody, i think i often do, but good write i enjoyed it...eor

Succubus
Member

since 2002-09-30

Posts 82
Canada, Ontario

2 posted 2002-10-09 10:56 AM

Wow, this poem gave me goose bumps. In my opinion, I don't think it's as much his fault as it is society's. Society tells us what's beautiful nowadays, and fat is not beautiful in society's eyes. Go figure, right?
This poem reminds us how cruel life can seem for those who don't look like what society wants them to look like...
It must have taken you a lot of courage to write this. Thanx for putting it out there, after all, nobody is perfect, and if we choose to give in and be something we're not, are we going to be happier then? Wouldn't we be happier if we saw those around us not as different, but as unique?
I am unique, you are unique, and unique translates into beautiful.
Kisses,
Succubus

Better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-10-09 03:19 PM

Sad surface,
sadder beneath,
but a bit wise
for that.

Oh, and do you mean "loved," not love?

Mikey

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

4 posted 2002-10-11 11:02 PM

As usual...another beautiful poem. I really liked this one. I realate to this soo much. Why does socioty have to place ppl in certain catagories and label ppl so much.I think that the only real women have curves.hehehehe

Amaranthine
Member

since 2002-10-06

Posts 61
ON Canada

5 posted 2002-10-12 02:55 AM

'what was will be
what is will be no more'
Ghostbuster sequel quotes aside,
that is how things work

20+ pounds over sciences' 'perfect' stat. -OR
Minus, is simply a matter of fashion.
100 years ago, Twiggy was ugly and YOU were
beyond gorgeous

F*ck him
F*ck that
I love you if only because of this poem and screw him besides
I know how it feels, and beyond the bounds of that---my 'he' was the wrong gender to love me back
I still cry sometimes

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

6 posted 2002-10-12 11:52 PM

Its just not fair....
iam insanely jealous of this very well crafted poem.

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