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Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
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in the interzone now

0 posted 2002-10-10 01:14 PM


I live a strange life. Want proof? This actually happened, last June. Everyone I know believes that this place in Carburn Park has troubled spirits, and they seem to be more active around me than anyone else. *gulp*

Here we go.


The hushed silence
amidst the lightning-shattered trees.
Held hands in the late spring night,
ducking down back paths
eroded with age.

All the familiar
apprehension
is rising once again.
Don’t look over your shoulder.
Don’t look into the darkness.
Don’t look at the path you’ve crossed,
for fear that there’s something there.

Emerging from the trees
and standing closer still.
“It’s near”;
a whispered voice
taut with urgency.
Still compelled to go on.

The thought, the place, obsesses.
Once you have gone
you must go again.
An empty lot
where the house still remains
in shadowed borders
of things that will not grow.
Images that move
only when you look away,
crows that will not fly overhead;
instead just land
on wavering branches
outskirting the emptiness.

Was it death? Fire? Tragedy?
Were the spirits, in life, cruel?
What leaves this place
so empty now,
the trees bare and growing
in awkward reaching limbs;
stooped and knotted
and trembling
in an unfelt wind.

Stare into the shadows,
the black path behind the lot.
The one that induces nightmares,
even after years.
There was a time
when the house remained,
and faces were seen in boarded up windows,
silhouettes recorded on film
in the doorway of a rotting shed.
Did it set them free,
the demolition?
Free to whisper
and follow in the night.

Hand in hand,
quieter now,
hurrying down the path.
The intent simply
to get away from the darkness
now behind.
Fleeting images stand
behind a fallen fence;
peek around the edges
of overgrown lilac bushes.
Ahead, a dark gazebo
with shadows roiling inside.
Everything in the night is moving.
Nothing in the night is alive.

Closer still,
feeling the fear,
passing a bridge and compelled
to look underneath,
in case something lurks.
Something that’s waiting
to drag the living away.
In a night like this,
it seems all too possible.
In a night like this,
everything is real.

A concrete image finally spotted;
a figure at the river,
stooped to drink.
Looking up once,
dead eyes in the night,
then gone without another thought.

Gasping near hysteria,
wanting only out of this place
where the night is too alive.
The path should turn here.
Why doesn’t it turn here?
The path should branch here,
back to the city lights.

Only darkness ahead
and only darkness behind,
and the path is gone;
a casualty of the night.
There is no choice no
but to go back,
to pass the property
and walk through its lurking ghosts.
There is no choice
but to look behind,
to face all the things
that were run from.

“It scares me, Mikhail.”
She held his hand tighter.

“I’m scared too.”

Still, they turned around.

remember the sound
that could wake the dead
but nobody woke up at all

rs

© Copyright 2002 LL Hager - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-10-10 01:32 PM


Ooh, now THAT was a freaky night (and it was this past June, not last June *kiss).

It's what inspired my poem Ruins in the woods a while back, but yours is much more evocative of what happened.

It's this burned out, ghostly looking shattered house lot with this awful energy coming off it. No trees will grow over the spot where the house used to be -- and birds will fly in circles without going through the spot.

I was trying to be Mr. Bravado (NOT Mr. Roboto) and wanted to go up and cross a fallen tree to walk onto the lot, but Lori wouldn't let me.

So we walked on, passing a gazebo (and by this time, a headache that had begun as a small ping had turned into a raging monster).

Then a fallen, empty field.

Lori suddenly says "Where's the stone? Where's the stone? The stone's not here!"

(there is a large landmark stone in the path to let you know where to turn. It was gone)

So we quickly turned around. At this point, I saw a figure leaning to drink from the river. And then, someone standing stalk-still with his back to us. Only ...

there was no one there.

Creepy cool night!

(freaky fool night)

I love this poem, baby!

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-10-2002 01:34 PM).]

Anvrill
Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now
2 posted 2002-10-10 01:38 PM


Babe, to me "last June" is whatever June last happened.

I've gotta stop writing about that park. Gives me the creeps every time.

remember the sound
that could wake the dead
but nobody woke up at all

rs

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-10-10 01:41 PM


It's weirdly addicting once y' start.
brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
4 posted 2002-10-10 03:15 PM


YES!
YES!
I love this stuff!
I love this month
I've always loved to be scared
fear is one of the most powerful
emotions
maybe the most primitive
call me a JUNKIE!
Very well done, Lori
I could FEEL the
queasy bone-white
face
penetrating my
mind
bidding
me
to
LOOK......
and look I did
*shiver*

[This message has been edited by brian sites (10-10-2002 03:35 PM).]

Anvrill
Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now
5 posted 2002-10-10 10:32 PM




You always respond in the coolest way, y'know; don't think anyone's ever mentioned that before. Makes me glad to be a poet, or at least a poet able to incite such reactions.

Yay!

Thank you.

remember the sound
that could wake the dead
but nobody woke up at all

rs

Amaranthine
Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61
ON Canada
6 posted 2002-10-11 01:17 PM


Strange, is it not, how one can feel so *un*alone in such 'lonely' places.  Each place has a story, only some have one loud enough to ring across into the subjective... and those are the places I love, the places that love me.  Even the cruelest shade savours company now and then. Thank you, your poem points me towards home again.
wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
7 posted 2002-10-13 12:38 PM


Shoot!
Can't compete with Monsieur Responder.
Can only echo what has been said here.

Loved it.

~Ed

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