Dark Poetry #3 |
A Haunted Forest (fr Mike's Scare Me challenge) |
Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I live a strange life. Want proof? This actually happened, last June. Everyone I know believes that this place in Carburn Park has troubled spirits, and they seem to be more active around me than anyone else. *gulp* Here we go.
remember the sound |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooh, now THAT was a freaky night (and it was this past June, not last June *kiss). It's what inspired my poem Ruins in the woods a while back, but yours is much more evocative of what happened. It's this burned out, ghostly looking shattered house lot with this awful energy coming off it. No trees will grow over the spot where the house used to be -- and birds will fly in circles without going through the spot. I was trying to be Mr. Bravado (NOT Mr. Roboto) and wanted to go up and cross a fallen tree to walk onto the lot, but Lori wouldn't let me. So we walked on, passing a gazebo (and by this time, a headache that had begun as a small ping had turned into a raging monster). Then a fallen, empty field. Lori suddenly says "Where's the stone? Where's the stone? The stone's not here!" (there is a large landmark stone in the path to let you know where to turn. It was gone) So we quickly turned around. At this point, I saw a figure leaning to drink from the river. And then, someone standing stalk-still with his back to us. Only ... there was no one there. Creepy cool night! (freaky fool night) I love this poem, baby! [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-10-2002 01:34 PM).] |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Babe, to me "last June" is whatever June last happened. I've gotta stop writing about that park. Gives me the creeps every time. remember the sound |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's weirdly addicting once y' start. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
YES! YES! I love this stuff! I love this month I've always loved to be scared fear is one of the most powerful emotions maybe the most primitive call me a JUNKIE! Very well done, Lori I could FEEL the queasy bone-white face penetrating my mind bidding me to LOOK...... and look I did *shiver* [This message has been edited by brian sites (10-10-2002 03:35 PM).] |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
You always respond in the coolest way, y'know; don't think anyone's ever mentioned that before. Makes me glad to be a poet, or at least a poet able to incite such reactions. Yay! Thank you. remember the sound |
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Amaranthine Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61ON Canada |
Strange, is it not, how one can feel so *un*alone in such 'lonely' places. Each place has a story, only some have one loud enough to ring across into the subjective... and those are the places I love, the places that love me. Even the cruelest shade savours company now and then. Thank you, your poem points me towards home again. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Shoot! Can't compete with Monsieur Responder. Can only echo what has been said here. Loved it. ~Ed |
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