Dark Poetry #3 |
So I Take |
eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
So I Takeā¦ So I take this courage And rip it right out of my chest And I'll pass it along to anyone Who has ever needed some I know it's not that much But ill do what I can I know it's not the same Since he's been gone So I take your picture And rip all up into shreds You're looking at me Staring at me Can't get you out of my head I know it's not your touch It's just the coldness form the wind I know it's not the same Since you've been gone So I take my passion And get it all out of my head You're gleaming at me Digging at me I can't believe what you said You'll never see me I'll never be free Forever trapped in my bed I know it's not the same Since my minds been gone So I take this courage And rip it right out of my chest And I'll pass it along to anyone Who has ever needed some I know it's not that much But ill do what I can I know it's not the same Since I've been gone ...eor [This message has been edited by eor (10-07-2002 08:16 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A melody and a song. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
yeah it actually is a song i wrote, i wanted reactions to it and i don't think its going over to well, so mabye one for the scrap books?...eor |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
This one is not for the scrap book. I got a great sence of generosity from the main character in the song, it kinda made me feel good. He's in pain, and yet still willing to share his courage... Very genuine of him loved it Succubus |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I'll take some. Very nice. Enjoyed. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
thank you guys...eor |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
and now I find myself putting music to it interesting that every one who reads this would have their own way of hearing it very nice E brian |
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Amaranthine Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61ON Canada |
I liked this. It seemed like a song, yes, but also like a spell. It seems to resonate in some indefinable manner with the apparently naked purpose of its words. Well done. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
thanks for your comments, and brian, if you don't mind, what kind of music did your hear,or melody...eor |
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