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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
I hate the way you speak to me I hate it when you stare I hate the way you touch me I hate it when you pretend you care I hate the way your lips taste I hate the way you sound I hate it when you sing I hate it when you frown I hate the way you see me I hate it when you flirt I hate fighting for your attention I hate it when you burp I hate it when you grab me I hate it when you bruse me I hate it when you slap me I hate it when you curse me I hate the way you drive I hate the way you move I hate your vocabulary I hate your breath of booze I hate your emotions I hate your affection I hate the way you love me I hate your confessions I hate your apologies I hate your lies I hate your warmth I hate your cries I hate the way you treat me I hate it when we're one I hate it when you sweat I hate you even more when you cum I hate it when you scream I hate having my name been called I hate the fact I must try to hate you For I don't hate you at all |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
very interesting, the last like totally through me throug a loop. i liked it though, makes me think of my best friend...eor |
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Amaranthine Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61ON Canada |
Hmmmm... I'd almost call this 'Ode to an Ex'. Love the use of repitition, love the use of repitition! |
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