Dark Poetry #3 |
True Love or Not? |
Sinful_Steph Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35Toronto, Ontario (Canada) |
I know we’ve had our problems I used to believe love concurred all That’s not the way I think anymore I know actions show the call Actions speak louder than words So goes the saying Wishing, hoping, and trying to work things out Does just as little as praying If two people are meant to be together If their love is real and true They will meet again in the future And share a love that feels anew They will think about each other Each and every day Wondering what’s happening And wish that each had stayed They will dream about each other While they’re awake and during sleep Dreaming of the good times Of the love they shared so deep The bad times will not matter Because they value the good times they shared Valuing the little things That showed how much they cared If none of this and more Never takes place The love was not true And this is something they’ll have to face |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
I like the style that this poem was written in and how its all so true about relationships itself. Very thought provoking Very much enjoyed ! Keep on writing.. -iMMuNe- |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Eh...I liked this piece, but I am cynical of love...always infatuated with someone (to pull one out of mid-air, let's say...oh, my best friend!!!!! Damn my stupidity!!!), so I am always reluctant to believe in fate with love... :..( Nevertheless, I liked this piece! It had an edge to it that still remained, even when the lines seemed to be a bit more positive. Excellent! "Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Wuz up fellow Torontian? I really enjoyed the poem. It's funny, I personally never, and I mean never ever consider even remaining friends with ex-boyfriends of mine. This is the way I see it: Well, so we tried to make it work once and it didn't work, what can we do now? MOVE ON !!! Lots of fish in the sea, and remember you can't teach old dogs tricks, so if a person's insignificant and what that person has to offer is insuficient, why go back to him??? But that's just me. I have a thang about not wasting time... However, I must admit that your poem did tickle a nerve of mine deep inside... ... and that's my compliment... Thanx for the tickling... Great stuff, Lator |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Read like a storybook with inevitable The End. Wow, I need to use that in a poem! Thanks for the inspire. |
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Sinful_Steph Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35Toronto, Ontario (Canada) |
iMMuNe....thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I'm having a great time on PIP and enjoy meeting some great poets. I look forward to seeing you around. D edgar Grey....this was written about an old boyfriend....I too, at this present moment have fallen in love with my best friend....so I can relate....sucks doesn't it. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Succubus....another Torontonian...nice. I've gone and read a couple of your poems....nicely written. I'll be reading more when I have time. Talk to you soon. bsquirrel......I'm glad you enjoyed. I find alot of good inspirations on here. I haven't written in a while and now that I've found this site...I find myself looking forward to writing again. Take care.....see you soon. "Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick |
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