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Sinful_Steph
Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35
Toronto, Ontario (Canada)

0 posted 2002-10-04 01:33 PM


I know we’ve had our problems
I used to believe love concurred all
That’s not the way I think anymore
I know actions show the call

Actions speak louder than words
So goes the saying
Wishing, hoping, and trying to work things out
Does just as little as praying

If two people are meant to be together
If their love is real and true
They will meet again in the future
And share a love that feels anew

They will think about each other
Each and every day
Wondering what’s happening
And wish that each had stayed

They will dream about each other
While they’re awake and during sleep
Dreaming of the good times
Of the love they shared so deep

The bad times will not matter
Because they value the good times they shared
Valuing the little things
That showed how much they cared

If none of this and more
Never takes place
The love was not true
And this is something they’ll have to face

© Copyright 2002 Stephanie Di Ginosa - All Rights Reserved
iMMuNe
Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA
1 posted 2002-10-04 03:52 PM


I like the style that this poem was written in and how its all so true about relationships itself.

Very thought provoking
Very much enjoyed !

Keep on writing..

-iMMuNe-

D edgar Grey
Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
2 posted 2002-10-04 11:29 PM


Eh...I liked this piece, but I am cynical of love...always infatuated with  someone (to pull one out of mid-air, let's say...oh, my best friend!!!!! Damn my stupidity!!!), so I am always reluctant to believe in fate with love...  :..(

Nevertheless, I liked this piece! It had an edge to it that still remained, even when the lines seemed to be a bit more positive. Excellent!

"Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones

Succubus
Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82
Canada, Ontario
3 posted 2002-10-06 01:47 PM


Wuz up fellow Torontian?  I really enjoyed the poem.  It's funny, I personally never, and I mean never ever consider even remaining friends with ex-boyfriends of mine.  This is the way I see it:  Well, so we tried to make it work once and it didn't work, what can we do now?  MOVE ON !!! Lots of fish in the sea, and remember you can't teach old dogs tricks, so if a person's insignificant and what that person has to offer is insuficient, why go back to him???
But that's just me.  I have a thang about not wasting time...
However, I must admit that your poem did tickle a nerve of mine deep inside...
... and that's my compliment...
Thanx for the tickling...
Great stuff,
Lator

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-10-07 12:32 PM


Read like a storybook
with inevitable
The End.

Wow, I need to use that in a poem!
Thanks for the inspire.

Sinful_Steph
Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 35
Toronto, Ontario (Canada)
5 posted 2002-10-07 04:37 PM


iMMuNe....thanks.  I'm glad you enjoyed this.  I'm having a great time on PIP and enjoy meeting some great poets.  I look forward to seeing you around.

D edgar Grey....this was written about an old boyfriend....I too, at this present moment have fallen in love with my best friend....so I can relate....sucks doesn't it.  I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Succubus....another Torontonian...nice.  I've gone and read a couple of your poems....nicely written.  I'll be reading more when I have time.  Talk to you soon.

bsquirrel......I'm glad you enjoyed.  I find alot of good inspirations on here.  I haven't written in a while and now that I've found this site...I find myself looking forward to writing again.  Take care.....see you soon.

"Love me little, Love me long, Is the burden of my song" - Robert Herrick

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