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iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

0 posted 2002-10-02 09:52 PM

Ive seen matters,
The matters of reality,
The reality of what matters are,
And how they have affected me.

But I have only one life to live,
One tear to shed,
These eyes have cried,
and now I've bled.

These matters,
Secretely seeping,
Into the horrors of me sleeping,
Weeping why the demon has released so much meaning.

So much meaning of these matters,
These serious and personal matters,
These pains that are the conclusion,
The jobs are so confusing.

To me,
The world is insanity,
With our own matters to hold,
Its so lonely now, so deep, so cold.
_______________________________________________

In time we have delt with serious and personal matters that have effected our life in many different perspectives of things that changed us for good, or just temporary. This poem was ment to give you a hint when you make the wrong dicisions in life how it could eat you alive or take advantage of who you once were...sometimes its good to take matters into your own hands, and not let anyone or anything change what you think.

-Just my lil note

-iMMuNe-

[This message has been edited by iMMuNe (10-02-2002 09:53 PM).]

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-10-02 09:59 PM

I thought I'd help you out.. and I'm the first.
As i've already told you this poem's great!
You have nothing to worry about.
I've missed reading you though...

Well, take care.
Talk to you soon.
~Sara

(i'm sure you'll get more replies)

"Slowly move on..how did we get to here? It all went wrong..gravity claiming all your tears."
-Bush

iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

2 posted 2002-10-02 10:02 PM

Thanks hon,
Im glad that you liked it! And I do hope for more replies, but I cant ask for that, lets have fate handle it hehe.

Thanx for standing beside me

D edgar Grey
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

3 posted 2002-10-02 11:55 PM

For some reason this piece disturbed--rather, surprised--me, and I don't know why. It has a wonderful meaning, and the piece itself is great! I think it was the fact that it hits home so quickly for so many that it throws the reader off...which, by the way, is a compliment!

"Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-10-03 06:06 PM

Nice meter, rhyme
and thought play here,
iMMuNe.

iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

5 posted 2002-10-04 03:49 PM

Thanx everyone who replied. This isnt my very best poem but I guess it had a point to it.

Thanx again,

iMMuNe aka immy aka Shawn

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