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Dark Poetry #3

Beneath it all

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

0 posted 2002-09-27 03:55 AM

whispers, secrets, peaking underneath us
wanting to be words of us
never stopping to consider thus
is just words from idle hands
trying to grasp the world of man
seeking shelter in nearby caves
infested with brainwaves
always running back
to the place they all came
trying never to be ashamed
of the letters they came

...eor

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2002-09-27 06:02 AM

nice one... made me think...

welcome to passions, and hope you enjoy being a PiP-ster --- read as PIP star...

hope to read more from you, as time marches on...

regards,
sudhir

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-09-27 03:35 PM

I enjoyed this.
Strangely felt like hip-hop
as done by Pooh's donkey friend!!!

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2002-09-27 05:03 PM

thanks guys, i liked that hip hop comment, it made me giggle...eor

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-09-28 04:12 PM

Nice write, eor

Think you'll like the PiP site

Think the PiP'll like you as well

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-10-01 12:48 PM

Welcome to these forums. I enjoyed the way you played with words. The "brainwaves" line was cool.

nolon
Junior Member

since 2002-09-25

Posts 20
Louisiana,Unitedstates

6 posted 2002-10-02 06:07 AM

Nice,I liked the poem.

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