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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-09-24 07:45 AM

I literally
ran into him
just as I was leaving...

He kissed me twice.
Hello.
Goodbye.

This is the story of my life.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-09-24 08:07 AM

Hey... did he at least throw yo a bone in between the kisses? I know..I know...
bad ron... bad ron....

We collided

her chest bumping mine
dented the straight facade of my day
but reminded me of the softness
of another's touch

even accidental
I found my day creased

Paddy
Member

since 2002-09-23

Posts 52
Straya

2 posted 2002-09-24 11:16 AM

Yeah right, and then you went back to your table where the ten other men were doting on you. Now come on Ms Blaze, you cannot expect me to believe that any sane man wouldn't drool over you. ... Oh! ... That was your point? ... He wasn't sane.

I guess one becomes content with one’s poetry when one opens the book ten years hence and does NOT exclaim, “Did I really write this?”

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-09-24 11:22 AM

kisses to both of you--OBVIOUSLY SANE MEN.

and...shucks...?

thank you.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

4 posted 2002-09-24 12:32 PM

maybe he was tired
and had to go to bed?
that's the only reason
someone
would leave YOU
that quick
right?

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-09-24 12:44 PM

Reading this put Hello Goodbye in my head.

AND THEN it put A Day in the Life in my head!!!

made the bus in seconds flat

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-09-24 12:44 PM

First things first:

Bri?

and Ron? you and I understand (okay, so you understand ME)

but Paddy?

just for public record? I did message you regarding just what your definition of "sanity" is--? still waiting?

But thank you for the presumption of ten men anyhow. Not a bad thought, if I let myself drift a bit...

but thanks all for reading.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2002-09-24 12:45 PM

damned squirrels wake up EARLY..LOL

kisses you...thanks...apparently bright eyed and bushy tailed...and yes, I DO mean YOU!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-09-24 12:57 PM

Strawberry Fields Forever?

Heh heh, Sen.

Paddy
Member

since 2002-09-23

Posts 52
Straya

9 posted 2002-09-25 08:44 AM

Awwww shucks. I have no idea where I might pick up such a message. I'm quite new to this site so still finding my way around.

Sanity is best defined as: the opposite of one who could nonchalantly say goodbye to you.

But, I know it wasn't your intention to allow me yet another opportunity, so, I should say that a sane person is one who avoids extreme views or actions, or in this case; inaction.

I guess one becomes content with one’s poetry when one opens the book ten years hence and does NOT exclaim, “Did I really write this?”

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2002-09-25 10:57 PM

Stories can be rewritten. And again...damn!

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