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Dark Poetry #3

Rumbled Thoughts

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2002-09-22 12:16 PM

In the darkness.
I sit,
locked within the bars of my thoughts.
The cool air numbs my body.
Death is knocking,
But my thoughts continue to rumble,
They will never die.
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Im not really sure about this one its just sort of me rambling, I guess.

~*Azi*~

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2002-09-22 06:02 AM

well I liked the picture
keep at it
having the idea is the hard bit

do sugggest that you could do a more with the idea of death knocking
do you let him in
can you keep her out
( i prefer death as a woman)
arthur

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2002-09-22 08:38 AM

wow cool loved the images

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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