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Rumbled Thoughts |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton 
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In the darkness. I sit, locked within the bars of my thoughts. The cool air numbs my body. Death is knocking, But my thoughts continue to rumble, They will never die. ```````````````````````` Im not really sure about this one its just sort of me rambling, I guess. ~*Azi*~ |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
well I liked the picture keep at it having the idea is the hard bit do sugggest that you could do a more with the idea of death knocking do you let him in can you keep her out ( i prefer death as a woman) arthur |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
wow cool loved the images If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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