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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2002-07-21 02:16 AM

lost marble bearings
barren shimmer dripping
sweat shroud shoulders
boulder-head lost thread
unraveled glass every
stagger battered
parchment paper
bones moaning
up the dust

wait

flail spasm
blood orgasm
ruddy skin
shreds air
rakes raw
sand never
stays clawed
breath
despairing
the dust

soon

white
swollen
crack
bleeding
twitch
blasted
boil
dust

now

smacking rips
fight for a
lung

dessicated
concentrated
moistened
on a
jackal's
tongue

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

1 posted 2002-07-21 10:28 AM

demented? well yes...I guess you could say I've found the beauty in this...and all creatures...

Very vivid stuff mistah bri!!

take care you!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

bsquirrel

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-07-21 06:49 PM

You're sick. I like it.

Dessicated Mikey

She said burn ... together.
-TON

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2002-07-21 10:24 PM

thanks d n' b
maybe it's from too much monty python
dunno
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-09-21 02:27 PM

Missed this somehow.

Seems an......interesting snack.

~Ed

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Moon Dust

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2002-09-22 08:46 AM

Yeah I like the way it flowed and esp. the ending

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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