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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I'm in this downward spiral. I’m gravitating to the floor, but instead of stopping there, i hit the core of there earth. There, my soul is burnt to ashes, but i survive. Now, soulless, i live not only alone, but empty. ..the.space.between.a.blink.and.a.tear.. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
great idea now then what does a souless person do?? arthur |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
This was a very clever poem, some very well thought out lines here, well done Anya |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I like this  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm telling you, if you don't know Trent Reznor yet get acquainted. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Mike... who is this Trent Renzor... I'm losing you. Thanks to all. ~Sara ..the.space.between.a.blink.and.a.tear.. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Mike will tell you, but he writes for Nine Inch Nails. Ragged angsty stuff. He once told me the same, that's the only reason I know who he is. anyway, you grow more confident. (in your writing, at least) ~Ed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah, but the words he writes are transformed by the music texture-maps behind him. Anyway, here's the lyrics to one of my favorite songs by him (I wish I'd written something like it): The Day the World Went Away I'd listen to the words he'd say but in his voice, I heard decay. The plastic face forced to portray. All the insides left cold and gray. There is a place that still remains. It eats the fear; it eats the pain. The sweetest price you'll have to pay. The day the whole world went away. Now imagine the most queasy sounding, crushing music overlayed/underlayed/through-layed. And you've got the song. (also see I'm Looking Forward to Joining You, Finally) Phew. Anyway, when I was a teen? NIN helped save my life. And as you can see by Drive slow, clouds; I mean that literally. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
God, Mike, I'm so stupid. I know Nine Inch Nails, I know Trent too. (not in person, but you know..) Names tend to slip my mind constantly. But yes, they have some of the best lyrics I've heard. One of my 'signatures' used to be a verse from "Perfect Drug". My brother has… 9 or more (a rough estimate...but I know it's all of them) of those little import things with 3 or 4 songs on them. That's the thing though.. Two of their CD's are called "The downward Spiral" and "Further down the spiral" and I realized that after I wrote this.. Anyway.. Thanks again. ~Sara |
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