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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
i'm choking on the fibers of your personality. i never realized how mu[c]h you mean to me, until you had gone. i'm drinking every drop of the blood you left with me. It seems like such years have passed, but it h[a]sn't been that long. i'm trying to ..forget.. that you were never really, here, but evertime I think of you, it fe[l]t like you were near. i'm trying to ..remember.. what if felt before you But those memories are bland you ga[v]e me life, then stole it when you left. Th[i]ngs have simply gotte[n] out of hand... "I never thought it's ever come to |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
I liked this piece, but I must ask one question--hope not to pry or anything, but who is Calvin? "cherry blossoms" |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I like your little subtle "acrostic" style here. Trying to recall how one felt before such a major change is indeed difficult. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
where have u been???? i`ve been lookin 4 your stuff everywhere! anyway nice poem! keep writin em. please  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
cool If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
D Edgar Grey ~~ Calvin.. Calvin would be a warm breeze on a cold day, but with a cost. It's a very long, boring, and complicated story ... also-one not worth telling. But I do that you for taking the time to read. Fractal ~~ Change is always difficult ... but it's almost always better. Thanks for you reply Allison ~~ I've been here ... just thinking, maybe more than I need to be. And if you care for an update at all ... this whole Calvin thing is dead ... he's the one that finally finished it off...ugh ... so complex. Ttys.. Thanks for reading. And Moon Dust... ~~ what one word can i use to outdo such a beauty as 'cool'? (heh) "I didn't feel so bad till the sun went down. Then I come home.. |
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