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Beyond the Tarnished Lance
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Beyond the Tarnished Lance |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Fringe upon the benefits- of starless night in falling, Embrace the hushing winter winds- that dawn of seasons awning... Slake your dust of destiny- Within my winding road, Kiss the hiss of serpentine, around a heart I hold... Secret yourself in boldness- and cry the wolf of tears, Potion meandered memories, With cross-top bow in steer... Only within a lilied dance- will pardon break the wheel of chance... So soar in sacred gaiety beyond the tarnished lance. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
A thought provoking piece tanya Some great metaphores here Well written Zall |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The knight in armor is tarnished, the lance a mere hobbling stick? Feel better, okay, Devina?   .m. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ You write such lovely thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Beautiful....enjoyed your work as always. DeaDiAmore |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
damn i wish i wasn't so tired so i could understand i will read again but just wanted to say how glad i am that you post again needed you here and not "help! um my husband has his thing stuck! oh god! help" ok ma'am calm down stay on the phone ok  im sorry |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
thanks arthur |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
My goodness. You seem to have quite the command over the english language. I found myself having to look up some words here in the dictionary, and that's not often something I need to do. I will need to keep this for further analysis. I liked your meter here as well. It didn't seem forced at all. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Waits the Knight, for the winter is come again, and the fall was hard. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Loved it for its images If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Zall-metaphors of the heart. yep. thanks you. Mikey- hobbling stick eh? my what images YOU provoke sweetie. evil grins here. Margiegirl- love seein you here lady. Missed you too much. dea- thanks to you hun. mybri- oh- and thingies *are* my specialty.  and this about? just some sad wanderings on my part I guess, but never fret I'm still a-bitin.arthur- welcome. fractal007- don't worry bout the dictionary sweets...have to use it myself when one of those words pop in my mind. lol moonlight romeo- and yet only a maiden can kiss those sweet bruises into hidding. ty moon dust- thanks you! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
D, just doin' my part.Mike |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"Only within a lilied dance- will pardon break the wheel of chance... So soar in sacred gaiety beyond the tarnished lance." Wow! What else can I say, much enjoyed! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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