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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
0 posted 2002-09-18 05:08 PM


Nothing in the world can help me
From the truth
That settles in my heart.
You brought it with you
And as you remain
It settles in my soul.
The thought of your eyes
Glare upon me.
A myst rolls across.
I see goosebumps all over my body.
Once i look up
I realize i am only
Looking upon your eyes.
You hold me there
With the helplessness you hold
On me.
I beg you free me
For I have lost to much
To be held captive any longer.

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)
© Copyright 2002 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
arthur
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since 2001-08-14
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england
1 posted 2002-09-19 10:57 AM

like it
arthur
bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
2 posted 2002-09-19 12:38 PM

Neala GoS,

I like the soft complexity of this piece.

Mike
WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18
Posts 486
3 posted 2002-09-19 12:57 PM

Very nice work...enjoyed.

DeaDiAmore
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-09-19 05:36 PM

Thank you very much glad you liked.
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