Dark Poetry #3 |
Insomnia |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Fight for sleep raging against the sheets too tight not right tangled in the bed a spider in web fitfully turning dementia's fog the mind with no switch for sleep I itch complain to the rails bumping, thumping lack of sleep wails pillows then tossed brain cells are lost no replenishing done in a fit of dark rage caught insomniac cage careening in rest I'm lifeless at best brain wired too tired still sleep I resist in shambles mind twist a coma I lack halcion attack false sense of REM sanity quite dim. WhiteRose [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-18-2002 01:28 AM).] |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I really like this alot, you really captured that feeling of not being able to get to sleep really well, you caught the fustration of it if you know what I mean, anya |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
a little malt whisky before you retire perhaps ? arthur |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Anne, The way you worded this I felt like I was tossing (in the sea) with ya. Mike |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ooooh that was me yesterday. But its cool I like it If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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