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MissunderstoodGrrl
Junior Member

since 2002-08-24

Posts 27
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-09-17 06:48 PM

I hurt so bad
does anyone care
can anyone see
is anyone there

can someone please help me
take away the pain that burns me inside
release this heart that seems so torn apart
make me see theres no reason to hide

why doesnt anyone understand
can you see when you look at me
im crying on the inside
cant you hear my plea

i cant hold on anymore
this life of mine is falling away
"its all in your head", "your gonna be fine"
those are the only words you know how to say

do you how much it hurts
to hear those words and hide how they feel
i push them down inside
where nothing is ever real

with all this pain
i dont know what to do
i try so very hard
but i just dont have a clue

to all of you who shout me out
i dont know quit what to say
what do you want from me
or should i just fade away

i dont know what else to do
leaving is the only thing that i know
so goodbye to all of you
im sorry...my true feelings i could never show
~september 17 2002 ~Tiffany

-:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world
Have you forgot about me?-:¦:-

D edgar Grey
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

1 posted 2002-09-17 06:58 PM

Hey...
I know what you mean to some degree. I obviously can't completely understand, but that's the way my friends are: I try to ask for advice or try to talk to them about something that isn't great in my life, and they pretty much ignore me completely. I honestly can't tell you how many times I wanted to scream at them to just listen to me for once in their lives; yet I keep these feelings in. I know it's not healthy, but sod it. A lot of times I feel as though I am nothing more than their psychiatrist (as I have met a lot of people by listening sincerely to them) and that's all.

I don't know what to tell you to do; as I'm not going to tell you what you should or shouldn't do. I will ask of you not to blame yourself or say that's it's a small issue, because that's as far from the truth as you can get. Mostly I vent in my journal and through writing, but that is often not enough for me.

To many more days of writing...

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

2 posted 2002-09-18 12:25 PM

hi
one of the lessons of life is to accept that ,in general,no one is interested in what is happening to some one else.No one wants a 50% share in you misfortune
as a poem i liked it
better than a lot and as good as most
keep at it
now and then you will write something which you think is good . And if next day you still think that -then it is good
arthur

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-09-19 12:30 PM

Tiffany,
Find a title,
and maybe you'll understand it a li'l better?

Mike

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

4 posted 2002-09-19 04:47 PM

I agree it very good and a good lesson to learn.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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