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Love Survives
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Love Survives |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia 
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Love Survives The anger faded long ago, washed away by tears that flowed easily. When they dried all that was left was emptiness, and pain. Pain that comes with every thought, every memory, of you. Somewhere, beyond the pain, love survives. 12/9/02 Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is an awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
the sweet salty stains these glory pains wash away the wonder of a will reatined leaving no care for all ive ever gained or loved beaten down by my own remains |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
how sweet and how true this poem is, enjoyed this very much, anya |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I loved it  ~*Azi*~ |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
love may survive but it decays without touch arthur |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
loner, thank you again I'm honoured at the "awesome". EagleScorpion, what a beautiful reply. Thank you. anya, from the heart usually is the closest to the truth. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Match, thank you. arthur, such a sad reply. I like to think that there is always hope. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Dee, I loved these words. Thank you for posting here! I like to think of this forum as "home," with Open being the backyard.  Mike |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mike, sometimes I would have to agree with you about Dark being 'home'. Other times I enjoy playing in Adult.  Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You’ve expressed some familiar feelings here Dee, and done it well! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks Eddie, its always good to know someone understands. D Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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