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Match
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since 2002-07-01
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Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2002-09-14 12:19 PM


Drops of sweat pounding against your temple,
Ear drumbs bopping.
Bodies,
In perfect syncrination.
Flashing lights,
Etching through your brain.
Music swimming,
In your taste buds.
Hazey fields,
Spinning arms,
The feeling of eternal numbness you can't,
Exsplain.

~*Azi*~

© Copyright 2002 Ashley Schell - All Rights Reserved
arthur
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england
1 posted 2002-09-14 11:08 AM


dancing can get like that
arthur

fractal007
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2 posted 2002-09-14 01:26 PM


This is a good combination between the experiences commonly found during flight on an aircraft and personal experience.  I liked the "Bodies, / In perfect syncrination." part.  

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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3 posted 2002-09-15 12:57 PM


HEHEHE

i know what you did!! oh yes i do!! i do i do i do i dOHOOOOO!

This poem took me to a rave club where drugs and glowsticks are plentiful.. i think you already exsplained it

.. here is a topic that has MUCH controversy over it. In fact.. even as we speak the senate is considering passing new legislation to rob our generation of our individual rights to assemble and HAVE SOME FUN (FOR A CHANGE)

Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
4 posted 2002-09-15 01:27 PM


I did nothing of that sort :P Life is to good, But it sucks that they might ban all raves.

~*Azi*~

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-09-16 12:37 PM


Match,
The only problem with raves
is the music.

I might actually go, just to drink it in,
otherwise.

Mikey

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