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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-09-12 02:40 PM



An even line, beneath the rim.
Fortitude of self within.
A fine line's gold, beneath the edge--
just enough to make lips dread.

A fan of fingers behind glass--
leaves of tea portend the past--
patterns lie in future's spread.
Saturn sighs in voice of dead.

Just enough to make me weep.
I search for you--within tea leaf.

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WhileIWasGone
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1 posted 2002-09-12 03:37 PM


Beautiful and amazing... just as you are.

Love your work Serenity....always leaves me in awe...

DeaDiAmore

Ceinwyn
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2 posted 2002-09-12 03:40 PM


mystical..hrm..spell binding..uhh I dunno..me likes..obviously

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

EarthenSoul
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3 posted 2002-09-12 03:41 PM


Divine divination, my dear.  I like this very much.
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2002-09-12 04:28 PM


divination...or creative visualization...

smiling...

Thanks for reading my dregs!

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-09-12 05:59 PM


Sen,
Now do it with
my Earl Gray.

*sippin'*

Mikey

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-09-13 12:47 PM


hmmmm....I tend to be partial to "oolong" but at night? a combo of hibiscus and passionflower, lemon balm, and just a taste of honey and cinnamon stick....oooooh....

thanks all...I LIKE tea...but danged if I don't LOVE coffee..but it makes me smoke thrice as much, I fear...

love*n*winks

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-09-13 11:38 AM



fractal007
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8 posted 2002-09-13 09:14 PM


The way you take a series of images and bring them together to form a setting and moment in time in your poetry is indeed impressive.  This is no exception.  

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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