Dark Poetry #3 |
Sand angels |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Their eyes of granite did proclaim nothing. 'Twas only sand. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-11-2002 01:08 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very profound...I like! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, Anne. I like yr Bob Barker is the void poem more. Mikey |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
HAHAHAHAHA..yeah, that one was such great fun. I was building to a serious ending and old Bob Barker popped into my mind and I just couldn't resist. Glad you liked |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you wrote it. |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Nice one, Zall |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Zall. Now I realize it should have been 'Twere, not 'Twas. Oh well. Mikey |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OH. *slapping my oblivious head* Now I get IT... *chuckle* dunno what it is with me and SAND...sighing at the beautiful brevity that says so much. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Beautiful... H. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Heh heh, thanks you two. Not the most subtle thing I've written. Mikey |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
sad that sand should be so...so? what's the word??? eh..I'll be back Mikey boy!!! when I catch that word. ~Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Devina, Sandy? .m. |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
So few words, yet it means so much. Very cool, I liked it a lot. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Miah! Mike |
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