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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-10 04:31 PM

If I could pull
from inside
this beast you placed
strategically
I would.

I would show it
in all it's horror
to you on a platter
of silver
(yes just like the gift)
and let you see
the monster
of indifference
it has become.

I'd show you the lack
of trust
the digs and don'ts
the habits you kicked
through me.

I'd even show you
all the stress

a mountain of stress
you never felt
for upon arrival
you dumped it in
with the beast
for what
I'm not sure
nor do I care.

And that
that is the
wretched truth
of it all
at last.

The beast took
the love
the caring
and all the rest
of what I felt for you
and destroyed it
as payment
for passage across
the bridge
to escape.

And you stay fine
in your world
minus the pain
that went with me

as the beast still lives
in all his damnable glory
within me.

whiteRose

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-09-10 06:00 PM

yes...the beast does come home to desecrate the temple...

oh..OW...

this hit home, lovie.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-09-10 06:05 PM

Anne,
I am sorry for your pain,
but what a pleasure it is to read yr words.
I hope they help.

Mikey

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2002-09-10 09:47 PM

the beast took
the love
the caring
and all the rest
of what I felt for you
and destroyed it
as payment
for passage across
the bridge
to escape
=================
this is great!
and sad
greatly sad
the beast.....
damn
hugs Anne
brian

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

4 posted 2002-09-11 04:02 AM

WR, love the line 'the monster
of indifference'

Great work again

Zall

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

5 posted 2002-09-11 11:19 AM

Serenity, the beast desecrates his own temple, tis the nature of him. Thank you for your response.

Mike, There is healing in the writing. Thank you.

Brian, thank you for the *HuG*. Twas needed.

Zall, The monster of proportions unimaginable. Thank you for your reply.

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

6 posted 2002-09-11 02:23 PM

Nice work.....

DeaDiAmore

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