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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-08 11:31 PM





Eyelids seared
with a sting
from tears
that burn
convincing of
another day
coming
so move
your feet
one
in front of the other
Step up
to
another searing eyelid
day
coming!


I know it's going
to change.




Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-09-2003 01:16 PM).]

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cusick
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1 posted 2003-08-10 05:06 AM


Shararose this sounds like a cry for help. Some will do that I am sure. Maggie
SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-08-10 10:35 AM


Thanks Cusick, This was for those times in life when you cry the eye stinging tears. And it does *always* change!!!! Nothing really stays the same. Change is really the only *constant* in life. But not a cry for help. Just once in a while in life those times come up, and thank God they aren't very often at all. Thanks for the comment. It's much appreciated.

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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

eor
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3 posted 2003-08-14 12:10 PM


nice write, the pain of change, or wanting change, or no change at all, but anyways gettign off the subject, nice write!

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-08-14 11:14 PM


Thanks Eor...this is about those times you go through in life that get you down, and you have to convince yourself to go another day of the same. Thanks for reading, and the comment.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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