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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-09-06 02:00 PM

Let them say what they say,
As I walk these lonely streets.
Let them do what they do,
I know I’d want to.

Never treat me different…
Never let it go.

Let them laugh or wonder,
As I look them in the eye.
Let them rage or ponder,
As they sit to watch me cry.

Never treat me different…
Never lose yourself.

I let them be who they are,
But when I ask the same…
They look and treat me differently,
Then they start to label…they’ve given me a name.

You’re the closest thing in my life…
Known, truthfully, as human.
Never change..
Never change.

You’ve let me see inside you now..
But I will bring you down..

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (09-06-2002 09:55 PM).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-09-06 02:04 PM

Sara, I'm starting to see hope again,
even with the ending as it is.

Oh, and it's "they start" not "the start."

I'm glad you like postin' here. I sure enjoy readin' you!

Mikey

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-09-06 02:43 PM

Yep, Mike's right. If you're not careful, you'll be writing about rainbows and puppies soon.(lol)
I like your writes, and it is nice to see your angst tempered a bit.
Keep it up.

~wranx

[This message has been edited by wranx (09-06-2002 02:44 PM).]

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2002-09-06 03:01 PM

the slow budding
of identity
and the building
of love
for it
ditto thems above
Sara
we watch you grow

brian
(friendreminder)

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

4 posted 2002-09-06 11:10 PM

sara,
i think that you are a really good poet and i fully enjoy reading your stuff. keep writing.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

5 posted 2002-09-06 11:40 PM

Mikey~ A guess there's a little hope. Only because I took your advice and 'let him go'. It was the better thing to do, I'm sure... and if not- life goes on, right?

Thanks for correcting me like you always do.. I need it.

Wranx~ I doubt I'll ever screw up enough to write about rainbows ... And never about puppies...I passed that phase long ago.(J/J)

Brian~ Yes.. and this reply also reminded me of my friend.

~and I'm smiling again...

Thanks Boys.

And Allison... I'm a really good poet? You went and told Sam, and she probably thinks I'm a freak now ... but why should I care, I guess..? Well, enjoyed reading your writings, and glad you took time out of your busy schedule to read mine...by the way...(brian reminds me of Benji...cause he always makes me laugh. Even though he ditched me and Mansanarez today...

-that ruined my day)

Thanks again to all of you...and for 'watching me grow'.

~sara~

"I never thought it's ever come to
-this-
in fact was never what you wanted from me, or how you meant it to be."

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