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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-09-04 11:46 PM


had to bribe my muse with chocolate chip cookies ;-)
ohh and the coke and rum helped as well! and ohh yeah my muse coaxed me into asking my Step Mum for a little advice

Goblin King
Goblin King
I beg of you
Come and
Take me away
I've found my thoughts
Flirting with my insecurities
Longing to run away
From fleeting reality
I long to
Lose myself within
Your crumbling fortess
Found deep within your eyes
I would even dance
Within the snow globe
Of disguise
For an eternity
T'would I escape my own reality
But for a taste
Of meandering corridors
Endless paths
Of the twisted labyrinth
Of the world between my fantasies

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2002 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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1 posted 2002-09-05 12:01 PM


This reads like a dark little fairy tale. A little different style for you, Methinks.

I liked.

BTW, your Muse drinks rum?  Gads!

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

Ceinwyn
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2 posted 2002-09-05 12:04 PM


hmmm yes rum and chocolate *drools* its like midnight and I should have turned into a pumpkin by now and I can't sleep *lurks back into the shadows* I want somebody to talk to!! my stepmum really doesn't count does she!? but nonetheless thank you

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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3 posted 2002-09-05 12:14 PM


All this needs is David Bowie, and yr set, Kristen.

Mike

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4 posted 2002-09-05 01:58 AM


Yes! The "Opaquely Clear" restaurant
Is so known worldwide for it's
Tasty dish of "Meandering Corridors".
This was refreshing and unique.
And well put!

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

Zall
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5 posted 2002-09-06 07:51 PM


Like BSquirel,

The film with David Bowie springs to mind,

Like this Cienwyn

Zall

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6 posted 2002-09-07 01:11 AM


Splendid. Mhm. Splendid.

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
            -Abraham Lincoln

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