Dark Poetry #3 |
peace be with me |
EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
peace be with me for i am at war no universal victor but victimized by the wind i offer a treaty of harmony you say goodbye with a destructive bomb leaving a mass searching for pearls in a harbour of discontent united three superpowers destroyed me, myself and i by your self-prosperous good aim here's to your "boom" of glory |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
the war! the BIG one analogy of within. peace be upon the inner. no envy gnosis all WWright? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
EveGnosis, I wonder where that pearl will turn up next... Mike |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
The considered words above, notwithstanding, Methinks that you are, indeed, as one with said triumverate. peace be with you, friend Michael. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
A thought provoking write michael Zall |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I agree with everyone as well..thought provoking, don't we all feel that at one time in our lives..most then many..touched a nerve..and yes may peace be with you.. Kristen |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Oh Michael... ~sigh~ tears. this boom has echoed and splintered inside my soul sweet man. You know my hugs are your hugs in this great big mess of internet. Take care! so that peace may us *all* ~Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
If ever there were the perfect time... Let it be boldly spoken. You inspired a phrase in coins: "a bomb of regret" Your peace is nigh...and your tribute probably less grand than deserved, but there. You wiped the war away, and left me...well, backwards looking..."raw" with emotions. Smile! Victory has been announced. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
EG - Your first two lines Are historic poetry! I truly liked this one May-b peace is already with you? The last few responses were Off the radar! (May Peace be with us all) "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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