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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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Fallow the ruse of languor-edge (a fable) trite poortry I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
just suppose that I am trite-- and even tears are cold cliche'-- like a rose that suffers blight as all my thorns get in the way-- of anyone that tries to fight the plight of the forgotten rose... I fall as weakened stars in night-- my petals handglide heart's deathblow... smiling. dunno where that came from...but it bounced from you and onto me.  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
fable? I'd like to wrap myself in some of that right about now. and don't worry mybri...d will survive...nawing and biting the whole durn way. enjoyed the bounce of you and sis here!!! duet? duet! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Now now, your words are much more than poortry. I'll linger on yr languedge. Mike |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ahhh! The blackink squirtrel speaks joycefully. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
wranx ... Oh my god......... I FORGOT ABOUT THE JOYCE CHALLENGE! I don't feel I have the tools yet to accomplish it. I'm gonna read Ulysses once I finish The Lovely Bones, on rental from a roommate. Mike |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I never like to admit Fallow to be my middle name, but yet, I digress... Your sudden jump to such trite and contrite (lol) shortness [is this a paradox or oxymoron...god, I'm losing it] is a welcome 90 degree turn in the far too often straight asphault of life. A W E S O M E ! ! ! ! ! ! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
THANK YOU PURITY i'm a simple ass but the word trinkets amuse me sumtime wanted to say opposite things in the same sentence but figured I was just being "tooooooo coooooool" and I ain't wan any a that! just a joyce fan is all oh well take care a' youself brian |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Consolation prize: Joyce would re, |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
god you make me feel like i'm back in ms. newton's advanced english class reading the old-english version of the "canterbury tales". yet, chaucer never weilded such a sharp blade at his then modern "tripes". those with 3-d glasses will immediately jump at your jumping to "wright" the wrongs! i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
in all honestly I've pondered this one this morning at the same time..woah..lol asked my step mum to help me break it down.. *cough* I'm sorry lack of caffiene and chocolate in my diet among other things..but now I get it..does that make me a bad person!? atleast I'll admit that something went over my head but now that I understand it..some good stuff! Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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