Dark Poetry #3 |
The Deepest Seed |
Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
The deepest seed takes longer to grow The time spent nurturing waiting anticipating Other less potentially flourishing fruits of labor arise entertain then fall well before the deepest breaks sod Were you patient? faithful enough to wait? overcoming the now? immediate desire? willing to see? the strength, beauty, longevity... In the further most part of your garden away from applause of bountiful season you planted me not for fame, stature or acclaim above all other planters but for hope of private pride in sown reaping of a variety most overlook of a potential palate eternal of a harvest of heart deemed crabgrass by ignorants of me, growing, to give back to you in return... of the deepest seed |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yesyesyes "good things come to those who wait, clarice" sorry----anthony hopkins-- but this society? why wait? I mean, c'mon! I want my stimulation NOW! dammit flash the colors before my eyes wait? I"D RATHER DIE! stupid crap we live in these days but, you are a voice in the wilderness thank you brian |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
ooffffff... we try so hard when we think no one is looking for what we want, and when it's there finally, we fear what others might say. we get scared, religious, too "happy family" of our surrounding's take on it all. if the planter doesn't rejoice in his harvest of this rare crop, then maybe he'll give it to someone that appreciates it? i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Purity, These seeds are sometimes bitter, but I will gladly down mouthfuls. Mike |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn! and Damn! This ~ "In the further most part of your garden away from applause of bountiful season you planted me not for fame, stature or acclaim above all other planters but for hope of private pride in sown reaping" Is reason enough to consider it all.....worth it. Thanks for this thoughtful penning, friend Purity. In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Purity Some great analogies there, thought provoking stuff Zall |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
No no no... (Devina vigorously spreads some sunshine)...burning my poor pale seat in the process...TOO white I am. I am all at once, sighing, laughing at Brian's immediate stimulation (cute bri), and caressing that seed of stimuli. Chris- I say that maybe the seed is in a confusing growth spurt? patience? YES. conversation? EVEN BETTER. stay strong sweet one, my love is with you!! ~Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
I would believe, friend Purity That it is from the warmth of such Sun's As those above in response That make the deepest seed blossom To the tallest, blue ribbon fruitful offering If the planter was roasting and toasting His corn harvest While you stood so tall in the corner Fear not, For you will be seen by the one Who truly searches for your special "variety" "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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