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News_From_Nowhere
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0 posted 2002-09-05 02:09 AM


The war is over
The sunflowers bloom
But I still grasp my sword tightly.


Dark shaded skin of evil-
Looking trees and, inside, the
Drunken women dance nude in
The light, unashamed of
What is most beautiful.

(Two in one, seemed to fit tonight)


"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

[This message has been edited by News_From_Nowhere (09-05-2002 02:10 AM).]

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wranx
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1 posted 2002-09-05 09:57 AM


Great conflicted images, and the two, do work well together. (but beg a third)

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-09-05 12:15 PM


I loved this, News. It's wise to use such few words to explain the universality/duality of our natures.

I'd love to dance with them, sword in hand.

Mikey

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