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0 posted 2002-09-03 01:02 AM

Unpardonable silence
zipped by fingertip
to lips.
hushed inside
orchid-stomped mind
that has
too much
to say
(you say)

The fiend
in me
begs to be
a crystal crust
of blood red dust
upon the skin
of sweet man sin.

just let me blend
just let me blend

To touch a flush
of slender hush
within a soul
I fought to hold

I am still bold
I am still bold

Never silence
a fire
that sparks
with hint desire
I break you whole
I fill the mold
the mold
upon your soul

Don’t let it go
Don’t let it go

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

© Copyright 2002 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
1 posted 2002-09-03 04:39 AM

Like this piece, the third stanza most of all,


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2 posted 2002-09-03 11:49 AM

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Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-09-03 08:52 PM

...And ya know? My whole life, I thought Sin was a lovely lady. (or at least, followed close behind)

Very nice, Tanya "d". Loved this read.


In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      


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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
4 posted 2002-09-04 01:01 AM

you plead and plead
but I'm just
a smithfield

drinkly here

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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
5 posted 2002-09-04 01:05 AM

Just let me bleed....
"a crystal crust
of blood red dust"

For I fear my bloodshed
a well of once perfect water
dried to the dirt you sought
with your empowering sponge...

D'...if you continue in your current array of amazement to me...

Well, the greek word for power is gnosis...

(That is a tantilizing concept)

Again, magnificent.

since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
6 posted 2002-09-04 02:04 AM

you just had to use the zipper analogy, eh, devina? lol. needless to say, this entranced me, but finally i think i know the severity of difference between zipped and unzipped. right? this was way cool.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

since 2001-04-21
Posts 157
7 posted 2002-09-09 01:23 PM

missed this blend of beauty from you sis...

moving is a chaotic thing...miss you!!!!

A heart can only truly break, once it learns to love completley.

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