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News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY

0 posted 2002-09-02 01:29 AM



Love, death, travel, revolt
This world was built on chaos and disorder
A majority of this word does drugs
50% of this world believes in excess
Everyone jumps on the bandwagon
Everyone has to dig the new thing
People have problems they keep locked inside
Very few people would die for you
You have no idea where the day will lead you
How many others have your sex partner [edit]
How many enemies do you have?
Hate is a very underestimated emotion
Policemen are supposed to be your friends
But they show hate towards most
Policemen are public servants
Yet they push YOU around
No one sees you for what you are
They see you as they want to
Then you die!


"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

[This message has been edited by Severn (09-02-2002 08:08 AM).]

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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2002-09-02 08:10 AM


Now it's really edited, NFN.

Unfortunately, leaving the first letter of a word that goes against the guidelines isn't quite sufficient - even with an (edited) added after it.

K

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-09-02 01:38 PM


Unfortunately, perception tends to be limited by our very biology. There is a way out, tho, (or so I have heard, and have to believe) but it's like wading into the ocean....

have a cup o hope!

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-09-03 12:17 PM


Into the ocean, hm?
Well, no wonder I write so many poems
about drowning!

Homecoming ,
Mike

Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
4 posted 2002-09-04 09:04 AM


yea, it seems there really is no good side to life sometimes...its just bad stuff happens and then you die.  Well good work.  Much enjoyed!
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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