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Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2002-09-01 09:00 PM

Why are all you so blind?
Don't you see the world goes in circles.
Everyday the same things happen.
Another person dies,
From someone elses lies.
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Im not sure if it's done

~*Azi*~

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2002-09-01 11:13 PM

Indeed, indeed. I totally relate, even wrote about it (reference:"Ask About This"). Excellent train of thought here. Good job!

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-09-01 11:43 PM

Seems done to me, Match.
Less is more in this case. Good musing here.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-02 12:01 PM

If everything goes around in circles, then there are no beginnings and no ends, so you've answered your own question regarding whether your poem is finished or not!

Interesting little poem. Made me think!

Linda

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-09-02 01:04 PM

smiling, I like this much...circles as symbols of divinity as well, the astrological symbol for SUN being a circle with a dot in the center--which made me ponder the saying, "The only place where time stands still is the center." See? you are quite right, each thought leads to another...smiles to you. I was wrong about liking this--I LOVE this.

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

5 posted 2002-09-02 02:42 PM

Thank you all, I've decided that it is done