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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton 
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The dark entanglement of webs hold me back from, The light. My mind won't tell me what it really, Knows. The clear blue sky turns a solid black. Is it the end or will I be , Back? ~*Azi*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This brought to mind a favorite song, by the late great George Harrison: Give Me Love (Give Me Peace On Earth) Give me love Give me love Give me peace on earth Give me light Give me life Keep me free from birth Give me hope Help me cope, with this heavy load Trying to, touch and reach you with, heart and soul I enjoyed this very much!  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That's a much better work than what I was reminded of. An old cycle of poems (long since deleted, because their sheer nihilism is beyond even what I could take) called the spider princess about being caught on a web and slowly ingested, then made new into a spider myself. I didn't like me very much. But I do like this poem, match. Mike |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Good work Match. Enjoyed reading this much! -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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