Dark Poetry #3 |
The Poetic Prodigy |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Everything she writes has life all words are there for her, each creation a little piece of art that she must capture. All rave at such great talent why her life, it must be grand. To be able to write such things each poem flowing from her hand. The sites she much have seen the life that she must lead, how wonderful she is a prodigy indeed. While inside herself she dies a slow death, each poem more pain. More words to fulfill a dream hopelessy failing again. No one understands for each word she pays a price, another piece of life another feeling cut and sliced. Inside she feels nothing it all comes out in prose. It's all that she has left, sadly it's all she knows. WhiteRose I said so softly |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
the worst things in life bring out some f the best poetry. whoever this is about, i know her pain. i think many in here do. wonderful write. the rhythm was fantastic. never broke your stride. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
I agree with MidnightSon. Wonderful piece. Enjoyed greatly! -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this is very nice describing the shell and the whole grass is greener thing but I don't think she saw this Sites Anne brian |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Great read, you certainly targeted it at the right audience! Zall |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
WhiteRose, I used to feel like this. You either end up gettin' over it, or it kills you. Mike |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Dear Mike, It is within my nature to simply "get over it". I hate the blues, it is a waste of time. So I spill it out, and continue on. Thanks for the replies everyone. |
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