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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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I know everything I have been threw Amounts to something But I don't see what for I am to young to deal with all set before me I have things I wish to live for Yet I can't have them Cause you must press so much apon me now I know what I want to become And I know I have no time to do it For you hold me back from it all If only you to the time to care About more than you Than maybe I would amount to more than you Or is that what you hold me from -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I know what I want to become And I know I have no time to do it" smiling, not one to argue---no, not me but I contend that you have no time NOT to-- change is gonna happen anyway, yanno? Enjoyed, and I noticed your critique message, and thought I'd point out, you can find help with that stuff in the English Workshop here!  (and? not to worry, I was an English Education major in another life--and my stuff is still riddled with noun verb disagreements and all manner of sin!)  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Neala, Goddesses are always welcomed into the Dark fold. Y've got th' Poetic Goddess of Depression, and once upon a time, there was the Goddess of Hell (she really liked Mozart), and now we have the Goddess of Sadness. Then y' throw in people like Serenity and Devina. And, the bestest of alles, Lori. Mike [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-03-2002 12:25 PM).] |
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