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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Distant dawn tickles the mind of disaster? it is mine. Solo Raven fly fly fly Dip beneath the crimson night to wash my tears in shallow tide. Solo Raven fight the flight Rise above ashed remains to hold heartbeat in sheltered name. Solo Raven speak no blame Enunciate. We are the same. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I really likes this. (i like ravens too!) Continue.. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Great poem!! I loved it. And the Raven was a good bird to choose! -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
you paint the most wonderful pictures in my head. crimson night... ooo what a painting... several actually. i'm interpreting it in a couple o ways... and this one feels god inside too... i think i'm flying with my own raven out of the ash right now. thanks for posting this, D. enjoyed. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this is like pastor/ congregation call and response chanting I love the enunciate has a formal power sound sweet sighd b |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
definetly witch work here---I'm keeping this one for "girls" if ya don't mind--and hey? btw? no I did NOT get an e mail from ya! (whatssup, lady love?) Oh...this one also made me smile, as I've got a niece named Raven--she's all of three foot tall and can kick me arse! (she's somethin'--grin) Must be in the DNA!  into the library we go! Miss ya sis! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sara- want to thank you for continuing to read...haven't been around much so love to you for that! Tanya- Oh G's...another one eh? I heard us Tanya's can raise some trouble, no? evil grins to you. Midnight Son- you deserve some hugs for interpretation, as I'm still trying to figure myself out...ty my friend mysibri-chanting? did you hear my -ehem- *background* voice as well?? I've been learning to throw it don'tcha know?? grins... my sen sis...GODDESS...have I been needin you lovey!! I'll send a repeat email to ya...and? good to hear from you...sending kisses your way!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hi, devina. Y'know, I coulda TOLD YA that a move would be stressful on all involved!  Take care, k?Enunci-sated, Mike |
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