Dark Poetry #3 |
Hold My Hand |
MissunderstoodGrrl Junior Member
since 2002-08-24
Posts 27Ontario, Canada |
Fear runs through me like water I feel theres nowhere to hide I need a shoulder to lean on I need a shoulder to cry on I need you to hold my hand I need you to make it right I feel your slipping away from me Leaving me to grow on my own I have no hope on my own Your what i need What i need to hold my hand Hold my hand while i'm here Hold my hand when i'm there Wherever i may be Here on earth, or there in heaven Please help me make it through Please don't slip away from me Just hold my hand until its time Be my friend until the end Always hold my hand Hold it tight For one day i might slip away Please Don't let me slip away ~January 30 2002 -:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
This was good! I enjoyed it much so!! -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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MissunderstoodGrrl Junior Member
since 2002-08-24
Posts 27Ontario, Canada |
Thank you very much...thats what i like to hear...im glad you liked it -:¦:-Hey god i know i'm just a dot in this world |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Missunderstood, I can feel the burning need in this -- and the talent you have for writing it down. Mike |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
A lot of sorrow here, good expression |
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