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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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The door is in the center in the ceiling out of reach opening a need in me beyond capacity of speech. Enclosed by panels of the past and future's gamble present--tense, I nibble at the things I lack grazing in a self-made fence. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
If but my past could only be seen by myself in present-tense as mere panels... I'd learn that of which you teach. Great work here...one I'll meander through a bit longer to hope to classically condition myself to a way out! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"The door is in the center in the ceiling out of reach" I thought we were back in the "Winchester" house for a moment. Hey! someone is reading "the Monkey Paw" on the radio. Damn! P.R.I ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Hey, Wranx... Have ya read "What Matters Most Is How Well You Walk Through The Fire"? Lol...such a befitting posthumous work...and so appropriate to serenity blaze's excellent piece! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Enclosed by panels of the past and future's gamble." Those incredibly profound words, were worth repeating! Gawd, I wish I had written them! No truer words were ever stated! Linda |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Great poem. I liked! -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
again with the farm animal motif?  no no you are the Sheperdess climb on the backs of your sheep to reach that hole in the ceiling  b |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling with Gratitude, this was actually based on a recurring dream that I have...thanks for your understanding.. and winking at Brian--too bad I'm not a wicked witch--I could use a flying monkey at this point!  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You, my dear, have never been a nibbler...might a suggest a hunt soon on??? grins...I know. I need it too. Drowning a bit myself, but know I always have an extra lifeline when YOU need me...one of the few I'd risk my pretty lil neck for!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You guys all rock. Mike |
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