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Dark Poetry #3

So you come...

Tiger
Junior Member

since 2002-08-18

Posts 24
Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-08-27 10:31 PM

SO YOU COME...

Can’t get out of this hole you disrespectful mole?
You lay there brawlin’ and cryin’
So you come crawlin’ and tryin’
Seeking for forgiveness and that’s when it begins.
You look outside.
You give em’ what you want!
You let it hurt.
You make pain unbearable!
You give them a taste of fear.
You make it hurt!
You let them feel the pain…
as you look around
Your pitiful dark sin takes over the horror of the ones you live in.

-Tiger

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-08-28 02:33 PM

For some reason,
the mad lope of these words
made me smile.

Mike

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

2 posted 2002-08-28 03:16 PM

Coolies. I like!

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Tiger
Junior Member

since 2002-08-18

Posts 24
Queensland, Australia

3 posted 2002-08-29 06:47 AM

Thanks guys, I guess this is what happens when you are bored in class, especially when its Study Of Religion hahaha (catholic private school)hahaha...

cheers- Tiger

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