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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2002-08-05 04:47 PM

time opens
and shows itself as a face
that smiles and weeps at
     the same time
spinning in
            eternity
noting the passing of Light
        and Dark
with
     outstretched
                   Hands

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

1 posted 2002-08-05 04:50 PM

seems that we can write for days upon the time and metaphor!!

enjoyed this my sweet John...good to read your words again..

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-08-05 06:17 PM

Always glad to have you stop in, Sven. Enjoyed yr words.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2002-08-05 10:14 PM

Great write, Sven. I love your way with words. It's always a pleasure to read. You do 'dark' well.

Sincerely,
Titus

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 2002-08-05 11:24 PM

You know...?? now that I re-read the title..I realize I pulled a blondie and forgot to

the read lines

as in your title...openings in time, or openings between time...(clever man)

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-08-06 04:23 PM

you got it hon. . . great job. . .

thanks mikey and titus. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2002-08-28 11:08 PM

lovely, you...
lovely poem.

Bringing you back from the depths.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

7 posted 2002-08-29 01:52 AM

Good write. I enjoyed it immensly
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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