Dark Poetry #3 |
Reaching for the light |
chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Dare to be true and honest, though life be not fair and just. In the righteous path you walk, though the evils of life at you mock. Have the goodness to forgive the wrongs of your foes, though they may on you inflict all kinds of woes. Though in darkness you may grope, you must never loose hope. If honest, righteous, merciful and kind the ray of light you will surely find |
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MissunderstoodGrrl Junior Member
since 2002-08-24
Posts 27Ontario, Canada |
I really like this poem...great work |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A nice write on your journey of hope, liked it. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
yes! when they knock you down, get back up, say "i love you" and let 'em knock you down again, only to get back up and say.. at some point, either your perseverance wins, or we true of heart are all made fools of. loved this. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Thanx misunderstood girl, glad u liked it. |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Thanx evee and wranx for reading and sharing ur views on my work. |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
like it |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Thanx zall for reading and replying.. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Good job! Although I am no professional at writing, I know what I like when I read it, and I liked this!! [This message has been edited by Dragon Mistress (08-26-2002 05:20 AM).] |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Thanx dragonmistress for reading commenting. Glad u liked it. |
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