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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton 
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Im not enough for you, You and the girls, You and my mom, You and your only love, beer. I want you to leave, be gone, Go and drink the intoxication of your heart, beer. I just smile at you stumbling around , swearing up a storm, Have another round of, beer. If only I could say "I hate you when your drunk", But alas I can not , For your name is Dad, So go sleep with your love clouding your brain, The love of Beer. I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call, |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Hey I like the way this tells a story. And I guess you can never hate your loved ones, whatever that means  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Sounds like my situation at home  . Great work though. I liked it lots.  I hope to read more from you soon!!!-Dragon Mistress ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
Thanks it is my situation at home so I needed to vent so I wrote....as usual I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Match, *hug* Mike |
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