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devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2002-08-24 09:48 PM

I caress emotion
with fingers smooth
hips sway victorious
for lazy tune...

and I realize-
(with brow unfurled)
that finger smooth
won't deaf your nerve
won't stifle grin
won't breathe turmoil
won't slake your fake
in shades of grey

shall I pardon-
upon bended knee?
or hypnotize-
with sting of bee?
shall I raise hands
in mock defeat-
inhale stock smells
with feet concrete?

or deign you falty
within design
and realize
no bleed I'll find
as long as you
belong
to love...

So much for
soft pads
small hands
full lips...

and man~

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

1 posted 2002-08-24 11:54 PM

ALRIIIIGHT!
de-doo doo
de-doo doo
duhhhn
"welcome back
to that same old place that you laughed about"
Tanyeaaahhh
this sweathog bringin pizza and beer
and poem?
all my wimmins got small hands
cause
you know
glad you are back
Vinnie, Washington, Juan, and Horschach

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-08-25 12:03 PM

Happy to see your face again.
Missed ya much. But, can't quite summon as much enthusiasum as brian, because, well, I don't have a sixpack in me.

Better'n good poem!
Missed your words, roun' here.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

3 posted 2002-08-25 12:34 PM

I most adamantly second the missing of one so awesome.

"shall I pardon-
upon bended knee?
or hypnotize-
with sting of bee?"

and "or deign you falty within design"

Great words from one never met, but whom has probably led me unto the correct path, or should I say into the correct "pitt"? lol

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-08-26 12:59 PM

I see you've taken let's get happy to heart.

Good.

.m.

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

5 posted 2002-08-26 04:12 PM

I liked this a lot. I whole lot. Thanks for posting it! I hope to read more from you!!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-08-24 10:36 AM

rifling through the cemetary here . . .
and lookie what I found!
*smile*
xxoo

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

7 posted 2003-08-24 08:19 PM

ohhhhh your words I can't describe what they do to me...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

8 posted 2003-08-25 03:00 PM

wow, i am speachless, really...

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

9 posted 2003-08-25 09:11 PM

You could bring one around the block and make them feel like they've gone to Disney World. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

10 posted 2003-08-30 12:12 PM

Much thanks to those who brought this one back. Quite the cynical, weren't I?? thank you all again. my love to you and this site always!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Lady Godiva
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 35
at the bottom of your glass

11 posted 2003-09-04 05:41 PM

Love your critique msg *strokes your ego*

love this..most definately!

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