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E New Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 7between the rouge |
Doctor give me a new chest And a 12.50 religion pimp To hang around my neck, So that I can zip up this Dress they bought for me You know it’s desperate here And the red won’t stay In my hair – it’s creeping Into the garden I stopped wearing my False advertisement stamp, That kind of padding just Won’t break my fall You know I’m always sincere (Just never to one man) Please please leave me a light on So that I can see to unzip This dress Ariel was always my favorite babe. [This message has been edited by E (08-20-2002 07:45 PM).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Welcome to passions. I liked your poem but i'm not sure I got the meaning. I hope that you will post more in the future though. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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E New Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 7between the rouge |
You have to think about it.. I'm sorry if I caused you to choke.. I hope you got something out of it... though. Thank you. Ariel was always my favorite babe. [This message has been edited by E (08-20-2002 08:08 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
E, happy that you scratched the surface of "Glamor in a can" for us. Enjoyed this, will look for more. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Oh, by the way, welcome to PiP and the "Dark" Forum. Enjoy your stay, E ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Sorry my brains mashed I'm tired but not sleepy so took me a couple of times to read  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Unique. Well done. Outer beauty only takes you so far. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah yes, secular and religious sex imagery, like Prince in his heyday. Cool stuff! |
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