Dark Poetry #3 |
Blink! |
EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
You missed it all. But hey, it's ok I sneezed and missed it too. Let's turn around and go back. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. [This message has been edited by EveGnosis (08-14-2002 01:09 AM).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
hehe this made me laugh If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
grin to this eg keeps replaying and is small enough to fill our lives I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I'm pleased to bestow upon you the Touche' Award... My fave of yours. Awesome, Eve!! |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
So short, but a perfect example Of so much said in so little words You outdid on this one. Atleast you both missed, eh? "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Nicely done. A humorous little piece. Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Did I miss something? Perfect in its' compactness. one could read this in many ways, making it sort of a mini universal situation. ~wranx (whadhejussay?) In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". ~wranx~ [This message has been edited by wranx (08-17-2002 12:14 AM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ah Michael dearest, you are too insightful for the rest of us... grins... Good to know I'm not the only one... take care you!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
D'... You approach the possibilities, and give of yourself even amidst the everyday turmoils of your life's transition. I was so glad to see you here tonight, and please don't leave dark...your voice is so beautifuly loud. Handle the transition, and still perouse this small space of existence. Michael, again I say this is my favorite, as I've always looked for a favorite in something that gave it's all in so little... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice and short and to the point...like this! |
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E New Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 7between the rouge |
Bless you I like that you kept it short.. some people just choke on too many words.. silence is sound.. Ariel was always my favorite babe. |
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