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EveGnosis
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0 posted 2002-08-14 01:03 AM



You missed it all.
But hey, it's ok
I sneezed and missed it too.
Let's turn around and go back.


i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

[This message has been edited by EveGnosis (08-14-2002 01:09 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-14 10:56 AM


hehe this made me laugh

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

brian sites
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2 posted 2002-08-14 12:29 PM


grin to this
eg
keeps replaying
and is small enough
to fill our lives

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

Purity
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3 posted 2002-08-15 12:14 PM


I'm pleased to bestow upon you the Touche' Award...
My fave of yours. Awesome, Eve!!

News_From_Nowhere
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4 posted 2002-08-15 02:29 AM


So short, but a perfect example
Of so much said in so little words
You outdid on this one.
Atleast you both missed, eh?

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

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5 posted 2002-08-15 04:34 PM


Nicely done. A humorous little piece.

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
            -Abraham Lincoln

wranx
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6 posted 2002-08-17 12:14 PM


Did I miss something?

Perfect in its' compactness.
one could read this in many ways, making it sort of a mini universal situation.

~wranx
(whadhejussay?)


In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

[This message has been edited by wranx (08-17-2002 12:14 AM).]

devina
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7 posted 2002-08-17 09:58 PM


Ah Michael dearest, you are too insightful for the rest of us...

grins...

Good to know I'm not the only one...

take care you!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Purity
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8 posted 2002-08-18 02:44 AM


D'...
You approach the possibilities, and give of yourself even amidst the everyday turmoils of your life's transition.
I was so glad to see you here tonight, and please don't leave dark...your voice is so beautifuly loud.
Handle the transition, and still perouse this small space of existence.
Michael, again I say this is my favorite, as I've always looked for a favorite in something that gave it's all in so little...

passing shadows
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9 posted 2002-08-20 04:51 AM


nice and short and to the point...like this!
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10 posted 2002-08-20 07:59 PM


Bless you

I like that you kept it short.. some people just choke on too many words.. silence is sound..

Ariel was always my favorite babe.

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