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harsh turned meek |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Grasping slaking mortar making spread it thick like jam for tasting Just a touch on tip of tongue sweetened hush in songs of blood. Aching tremble body shaking awake at last no more mistaking all you see and all you do seems a shell of constitute Bending blending drip of heart singe the ends and drink your start amidst the chiming crying winds Suckle drip in silent blends Caress your finds with will of mind and clamp your teeth for harsh turned meek. Just a touch on tip of tongue sweetened hush in songs of blood. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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desolation angel Junior Member
since 2002-08-11
Posts 20east coast |
Just a touch on tip of tongue sweetened hush in songs of blood. that was beautiful. you know what it reminds me of? (and i have no idea why) Aquatic Nocturne by Sylvia Plath. don't undress my love |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
devina, m'dear I keep tryin' to comment here, methinks I need another read (or 2) need another beer (or 2) need an hours nap (or 2) I'll be back! ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... is sometimes, intolerable. Bukowski [This message has been edited by wranx (08-12-2002 09:14 PM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
most feral of you nosferatu ya want fries with that? how bout a straw for that shake? vixen lovin' it here soylent breen  I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
ooof, devina, my love. i would pray for a chance of apology for any wrong doings before i was on your mind in this stirring the cauldron chant. your manipulation of words from this language is enticing. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
nice imagary davina wanx good idea If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
"Bending blending drip of heart singe the ends and drink your start" those words stick in my head, and i love it. your poetry reads so well with Darling Violetta playing in the background... this left me with hauntingly sultry pix in my imagination. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Nice work...enjoyed very much devina. DeaDiAmore |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
desolation angel- now you have me looking that up...ty!!! wranx- I keep telling you to drink the VODKA...works like a charm man!!! mybri- straw for what sha---OOHHH...he he gottcha now mr!! was doin the scratchin head thing...LOL you are too sweet!! Michael-you and those apologies...gimmee HUGS...dammit... *mwah*Moon Dust- thank you for that...just don't ask where this one came from!! grins. MidnightSon- good. I left that specially for you dear. So good to see you again...I look and I look..and? here you are... Dea- ty as always lady! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hmas;ldkfja;sdlfkjasd;lfkjasdf......... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling...I took a minute to go back...and read you--THEN--and it does not even compare to NOW. and? I loved you THEN TOO...sigh.. you are a cuddly hug of sister poet. |
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