Dark Poetry #3 |
array of clouds |
brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
red cascades the blue pages I grab the purple thunderhead rages and make righteous rue in royal hue reflex elbow bends irony to lip a hypocrite sip hits the cloud softening to grey ponder-chair dismay at array of injustices we choose from what side is defaced does not matter it all blocks out the sun what I have to offer I open and pour gold on the purple passion I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and you prove your artistry time and again, even to the short-sighted me... (I checked my attitude at the door t'nite! ) but? I do confess, I love the breaks here, and it does have impact--but I'm not gonna beat a dead horse--wouldn't even beat a live one--I just tend to be a bit Obsessive/compulsive...sigh sigh and tsk to me and bravo to YOU. |
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misery_made_beautiful Junior Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 36 |
Boy, you got me on this one. Would this have anything to do with writing? If not, it's not you, it's me... Like the imagery and flow. The big-bad-bri-ster does it again! P.S. I wonder how Jac*ass is doing Later P.S. I wonder how Jac*ass is doing Later "Aging keeps life interesting" [This message has been edited by misery_made_beautiful (08-18-2002 11:26 PM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thanks, Karen and relax The "mess" from the other night did learn me a little. Oh, and, your attitude is part of your charm and is missed by this dude anyways c'mere and gimme a hug mis- thanks, dude no it's not writing but, something else that's bugging and as for the little fella I don't want to think about it anymore poor little creature |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Yep, this place can sure make one angry ... but you still feel "belonged." If that makes sense. Mike |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
It does, Mike and I do thank you |
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