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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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Longing for a glimpse of days gone by. Desiring the past, yet here in the now. So much pain, so much torment. All sorrow, all lies. Happiness is in the days, the days gone by. Nevermore, and too hard to repeat. My future may be bright, but our past is dark as hell. [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (08-14-2002 05:36 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Enjoyed this, Titus. Glimpse, not glimps -- unless that stands for Gigantic blimps. Hmm, that alone would make an interesting poem.  Headin' to Florida Guy |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Glad you enjoyed it, Mike. What did you enjoy in particular? What did you feel it was saying? I'd love to hear. What's in Florida? When do you leave? Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The words are small, simple and blunt as stones that are being thrown through a window. It's sort of a staggering hope to it. Very real and human. That's what I meant.  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
its good to look forward to future. loved this If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thanks. Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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