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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-08-19 11:50 AM

Her words are thunder to my broken heart.
Lightning defines every shadow sharply.
Shadow chains, not the metal cold.
Like rain.

Her words are hailing ice bones of regret.
Breaking windows with white stones she throws.
Such frail letters fall apart on impact.
Like snow.

Her words are violent winds within the trees.
Ripping leaves to tatters of dead fingers.
How will they catch the sun, she needs it so?
Like fire.

Her words wander down the moonless road.
A distant sign that never travels with her.
Always aching eyes to read that warning.
Go home.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-08-19 12:34 PM

Shadow chains, not the metal cold.
Like rain.

yep....she's liquid electricity...fluid and full of valued shock. Hold on to her, lovie.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-08-19 12:40 PM

I'm not even sure who this is about, who this "her" is. I'm just tired from my trip, I guess.

And on a different note, I saw Spider-man on the plane ride to Fla., and the ending just frustrated the living hell out of me. It felt like such a cop-out. Grrr!

I'm so complicated, huh? But not in the Avril Lavigne tie-wearing way.

Wow, I'm all over the place this morning.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-08-19 01:36 PM

Welcome back, squirrel dude!

This seems to be a lonely little ditty.

"Her words wander down the moonless road.
A distant sign that never travels with her.
Always aching eyes to read that warning.
Go home."

Sleep, says he.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

4 posted 2002-08-19 01:50 PM

There ain't nothin' wrong with bein' complicated in the Avril tie-wearin' way! Y' can borrow mine, straight from Scotland, with the bitchy pin on it.

*kiss* I almost always get the impression you're talking to/about me when you use the word 'she', baby. I understand I'm a bit biased, but still, even Serenity got a hint of it.

Besides, you can't write a poem mentioning hail (even if you didn't come outright and say that word

) AFTER I've written a God of Hailstones themed poem and expect me not to wonder where yr words were comin' from.

I love you.

And yr poetry.

Very much so.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-08-19 02:14 PM

I have this problem of

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-08-19 02:23 PM

spilling my guts in

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-08-19 02:26 PM

public forums. *ahem*

Thanks, wranx and Lori!

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-19-2002 02:36 PM).]

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

8 posted 2002-08-19 02:46 PM

You forgot Serenity.

Oh weirdly spacing one.

If you were busy deleting stuff you put, you'd better go back and fix that... Y'know you're not allowed to start saying something then not follow through. So there.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-08-19 02:57 PM

Oh, I was most DEFINITELY busy deleting stuff I put.

And I thought I did thank, Sen. Oops! If I didn't, sorry Sen! Can I have an omelette?

Mikey

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

10 posted 2002-08-19 03:15 PM

Well, if you're not going to tell the rest of the world, you're at least going to write it in an email to me... This very instant. And ask my forgiveness for making me wait.

Hmm, I think Kim might be creeping into my mood. Down, grrl, it's Bronwen's turn to have a romp in my way-too-twisted mind.

i'll be waiting for you
do exactly what you're told

jm

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2002-08-19 03:46 PM

Eh, I'm just a confused little squirrel right now. I like wranx's suggestion -- sleep.

Or sleep at work, which isn't nearly as desirable...

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