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BLAKE (A Tribute in Hidden Acrostic Form)
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BLAKE (A Tribute in Hidden Acrostic Form) |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Being led across kingdoms, entranced Circling his awareness Mind’s persistent impeccable omniscience... Nobility Being led across kingdoms, entranced Curing his animosity Momentarily pleased...inviting... Openly nurturing Being labeled as knighthood evolved Creating hostile avengers Mercifully pardoning...initiating One’s necessity [This message has been edited by Purity (08-18-2002 03:25 AM).] |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I don't understand, my truest friend said... well, I wrote this for my friend Blake Champion, and although I know we're not supposed to mention specific names in this forum, since my friend passed on, I thought I'd cry in front of you...using his name as a way to vent my loss of such a noble soul... Each and every line spells out "Blake Champion"... and so inadequately memorializes him... that in the eve of his leaving this Earth, this was the best attempt I had at trying....[Sorry, Blake] He was my best of all, and left our attempt at the world, to travel his own...Married, accepting three kids not his own, and finally making one for his reflection...they all were killed tonight in a tragic road accident. I weep immensely, and share the story of sorrow with all of you, my newfound respite of friends! [This message has been edited by Purity (08-18-2002 03:41 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Please accept my heartfelt condolences on this tragic loss, Purity. My heart aches for you. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
As does mine, friend Purity. Seems he was a man, aptly named. ~Ed |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*extending my hand* come get some hugs whenever you need them lovie... I can only imagine the pain that you have held with this...just know that your love and tears urge him and his family to a better place. You know my email is yours sweet C... and I just had to mention in a time of sorrow- forgive me- but this is an outstanding hidden tribute as well... much love ~Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
i bow to your unbelievable level of endurance, oh friend purity. this was saddeningly beautiful, and you have a friend here for refuge and respite. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I am so, so, so sorry... Nothing is worse than the sudden loss of those you care about... This was a beautiful devotion to him. i'll be waiting for you |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
everyone should have friends like you. a beautiful way to incorporate him into the poem in more ways than one. brian |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I loved this, Chris. A wonderful tribute and evocation of your friend. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I sorry about your loss, it was a lovely tribute though. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
"The only intolerable thing is that nothing is intolerable" Purity, heartbreak is one thing...heartbreak in loss through death is an abomination not understood. This was so chivalrous, noble, and memorially appropo. Your friend would (and I am sure of this fact, is) proud. Excellent tribute. And my sincerest condolences, humble friend. "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
weep and remember smile and be glad that such a one existed arthur |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
You have a talent with words. I haven't yet the talent for deciphering the acrostic part, lol. Anyhow, you are quite good at telling much using few words. This is definitely one for my library. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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